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sgi.html typo fixes
- To: bugs_(_at_)_openbsd_(_dot_)_org
- Subject: sgi.html typo fixes
- From: Christer Solstrand Johannessen <csj_(_at_)_csj_(_dot_)_no>
- Date: Mon, 20 Sep 2004 13:04:58 +1000
fixed a few typos and some wording. enjoy :)
i'm not too sure about this sentence, however:
"The OpenBSD Mips support has since then been supported
outside the OpenBSD project."
it might read "The OpenBSD Mips support has since then been
further developed outside the OpenBSD project." or something
like that.
-- christer
--- sgi.html.orig Mon Sep 20 04:49:43 2004
+++ sgi.html Mon Sep 20 05:00:19 2004
@@ -45,10 +45,10 @@
<p>
The OpenBSD/sgi port has its roots in the OpenBSD/arc port created early
in the OpenBSD history. Arc support was rather soon dropped due to lack of
-interest and availability of decent hardware. The OpenBSD Mips support have
-since then been supported outside the OpenBSD project. As SGI hardware have
-become affordable and easy to get by, interest for a SGI port in the tree
-have increased. The final piece, a working 64 bit toolchain, is now
+interest and availability of decent hardware. The OpenBSD Mips support has
+since then been supported outside the OpenBSD project. As SGI hardware has
+become affordable and easy to get by, interest for an SGI port in the tree
+has increased. The final piece, a working 64 bit toolchain, is now
available and the 64 bit SGI OpenBSD port is now in the tree.
</p>
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
<li>Support the O2 built in audio
<li>X11 server support
<li>Larger user VM space. Currently limited to 2GB
- <li>Support more SGI HW like Origin 200, Octance, etc
+ <li>Support more SGI hardware like Origin 200, Octane, etc
<li>Support for multiprocessor systems (<b>not</b> NUMA)
</ul>
</p>
@@ -103,8 +103,8 @@
<h4>Supported peripherals</h4>
<p>
-While most models support expansion via PCI many PCI devices may work.
-However each device has to be tested before they will be listed here as
+As most models support expansion via PCI, many PCI devices may work.
+However, each device has to be tested before they will be listed here as
supported so if support for a particular device is wanted, suitable hardware
must be made available to a developer who can test and verify functionality.
</p>
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@
</a> as well.
<p>
-Until a bootable CD is avaialble, netbooting is the only available
+Until a bootable CD is available, netbooting is the only available
installation method.
</p>
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